托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第19篇:20年后人们是否会有更多的业余时间

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；作者在句法层面做的很棒；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以；请注意分段。

This is a difficult question and the first and important thing is to define what is the leisure time for people at that time. In today, the leisure time means do not work or when you do something without any payment from your boss. And according to this definition, work means do things with payment from other ones. But what is the situation of the next twenty years? The job which to earn money from others may be less and less and more and more people would have no job and have to manage themselves.So at that time, the definition of leisure is not doing no work but do something just for your own interest. According to this definition, I think the leisure time will be less in the next twenty years because persons have to spend more time to control themselves and at that time their interest would be their career and help them to make money.