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When hearing or seeing something,we think it exactly happened,which is unwise to do that.The great importance of that we should do is seeking for the thruth.There is someing that we need to do before it. First of all,we should examine the background of what have happened,and make sure if it can be forgave.Then we can think it over wether it can be
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