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when I think about what do people make their decision.Different people may hold diferent opinions. But if you make you decision what you have heard or what you have seen, you are unwise. Nowaway, people get information from many ways,such as TV and intennet.They may think that those information what they have heard and seen are true.But are those which mediam deliver to us are the essences of the events?We must think of the essence but not to trust the superficial phenomenon.First, we must pick up what we really need and think those information deeply.Second, the public mediam may take up the responsbility to express the truth. Only in this way ,can we will get the essence of the information.Remember it is unwise to make your dicision depend what you have just heard and seen.
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