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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40881
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

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when I think about what do people make their decision.Different people may hold diferent opinions. But if you make you decision what you have heard or what you have seen, you are unwise. Nowaway, people get information from many ways,such as TV and intennet.They may think that those information what they have heard and seen are true.But are those which mediam deliver to us are the essences of the events?We must think of the essence but not to trust the superficial phenomenon.First, we must pick up what we really need and think those information deeply.Second, the public mediam may take up the responsbility to express the truth. Only in this way ,can we will get the essence of the information.Remember it is unwise to make your dicision depend what you have just heard and seen.

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