如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
when I think about what do people make their decision.Different people may hold different opinions. But if you make your decision what you have heard or what you have seen, you are unwise. Nowaway, people get information from many ways,such as TV and internet.They may think that those information what they have heard and seen are true.But are those which medium deliver to us are the essences of the events?We must think of the essence but not to trust the superficial phenomenon.First, we must pick up what we really need and think those information deeply.Second, the public medium may take up the responsbility to express the truth. Only in this way ,can we will get the essence of the information.Remember it is unwise to make your dicision depend what you have just heard and seen.
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