高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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China is now more and more involved in international events, Civilized manners play an important role in international communication。So it is necessary for us to improve the qualities of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication Sometimes some people don't behave properly in our daily lives. For example, spitting in public places can be seen somewhere. The flowers in public gardens are picked. What is worse, rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street. In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make foreigns look down upon Chinese,which will ruin the good reputation of China as a large country with a long history. So all people should be taught to be well-behaved and every one of us should form good habits from now on.