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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9039
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

From the picture, we can see that has two persons communication with the impact of the Internet on learning. One word is obvious which " once I learn how to use Google, isn't that all the education I really need?" As we know, everything has two sides. From the Internet seeing, if we are addicted to it, will effecte of study and life. On hand, it is impact to our study,it will decline our efficiency of the study. On the other hand, we may take a lot of time to play the Iernet, skim the Internet information or some pictures. It will immerse face-to-face communication with our friends and families. In my opinion, we should learn control ourselves mind and take some measures to guide it.

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