高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例。

My hometown is in Guangxi ,it was a very small town ten years ago which was located in mountains.Green trees and a clear river was around the town.and a lot of fishes were playing in the river.The houses of the town were very simple and the roads were very narrow.The people worked hard but lived in a poor life.But now the town had changed a lot,the high-rise buildings and stores are everywhere ,small or big cars come and go on the roads ,industrial development have made the environment to deteriorate. Forests have become decreased and fishes have vanished.Deal with the pollution becomes an urgent matter.