2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, more and more people like shopping on the internet,especiaiiy youngers. With the development of science techololege,many people has their own computer or phone,not only the kids but also olders. Shpping online became a modern behavior. On the one hand,shopping online is good for us.Its very convenient.you can find everything you want without going anywhere.Its cheaper than the supermarket,what i thought is just the psychological effect.On the other hand,I have to tell you some shortcomings about shopping online.First,when you surf the internet,what you see is not really,you don"t kown the quanlity.Next,Its dangerous when you pay for your product. in my oppinion,being carefully when you shopping online.maybe its a good idea to shopping in the more surrounding you.