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Nowadays, more and more person like shopping on the internet,especially youngers. With the development of science techololege,many people have their own computer or phone,not only the kids but also oldders. Shpping online became a modern. On the one hand,shopping online is good for us.Its very convenient.you can find everything you want without going anywhere.Its cheaper than the supermarket,while I thought Its just the psychological effect.On the other hand,I must list you some shortcomings about shopping online.First,when you surf the internet,what you see is not really,you don"t know the quanlity.Next,Its danger when you pay for your product. In my opinion,being carefully when you shopping online.Maybe its a good idea to shopping in the more surrounding you.