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Social development today has improved the material standards of living,but which also bought more pressure on us.The pressures may come from education,career,or famiy which make us feel dejected or down.As for me,it’s important to keep a good mood in our life so that we can enjoy life even under pressure. For one thing, you must be an easy-going man if you always in a good mood,which could help you get along well with others.What’s more,you’ll spend your time in the atmosphere full of pleasure of warmth.It could not only improve your working efficiency but also get colleague friendship. For another thing, you may glad to help someone in trouble and help him with your optimistic and positive attitude.In addition,you could feel good and have a sense of mental fulfillment,which helps to reduce you pressure. From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that we can't avoid pressure in our life,but we can keep a good mood to accept pressure.