2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句。

nowadays, we seem to enter a world that contact with computers, we use it to work, study, watch films and so on. computer has become a second brain of us. do you think so? humans created computer , abosolutely it brougt many good things for us . but the proverb goes:" every coin has its two sides.", computer is no exception. in many places, childrens seem like not recognize the great function of computer, they use it to play computer games and addicted to it. even more, they played it day and day , they could not to eat and drink , but no computer. day after day, they became a bad guys until they get rid of it. today, computer and man getting increasingly connected and must be addressed.