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Nowadays,excessive packaging can be widely seen in our life.The cost on packaging is higher than the commodity itself,which is used to catch customers' eyes to promote consumption. Nevertheless,have we had self-examination regarding to this phenomenon when complaining about it?As our society develops,the production alonging with the needs from people becomes increasingly rapid,and there is oversupplied,which makes sellers worried.Accordingly,they determine to sell their goods with magnificent packaging to attract customers. From my perspective,I think it is a kind of consumption deceiving.The conscienceless sellers will reap more benefits from excessive packaging.To prevent ourselves from it,initially,we are not supposed to purchase just concerning its outward.As the saying goes,do not judge a book by its cover.Those showy things are not substantial factually.Similarly vital,do not waste plenty of time on shopping.It is easier to confuse and tempt us to buy more because of excessive packaging. Maturity and sense are significant in shopping to decrease excessive packaging.