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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, people pay more and more attention to appearance. The good looking guys dominate on the life and career.However, beauty does not equal character. I think it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. The social phenomenon proves my point. The red apple may be toxic. Some well-dressed people just concentrate on their appearance but overlook the moral character.They may litter or use bad language. Even worse, they may bully. To the contrary, some people who ignore their appearance may be kind-hearted.Thus it can be seen, appearance is not the judgement standard about moral standing. From above, we can infer that good looking may not mean good mind. To judge a man is good or bad, we should observe carefully in life. We should hold the view that judging a person by their appearance is unwise.

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