2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

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In these two pictures,depicting two scenes among younsters in our current society,in which one deliberately dirty his appearance with a celebrity's name-Backham,likwisely,the other spare even three hundred Yuan to make his haircut in order to be similar to the superstar.These things,to some extent,can be described as moral failing and character falws.Actually,it's a kind of aspect of belief lost. Nevertheless,what accounts for the misguided phenomenon spreading among Chinese younsters?.For one thing,most children are from one-child family then parents lavish care on them,misses out the training of setting right goals of their lifetime.Overtime,they become indulge in hot pursuit of these celebrity without objective attitude.For another,social is aother dispensable factor.With the popularity of idorship trading,commercial medias provokes something that seems to be cool,meanwhile ,younsters're easily affected by others. All in all,lost belief can be considered as personality disorder akin to physically disabilities. On the one hand,family should set good examples,especially the cultivation of full character ,the choice of friend,the setting of goal and so forth. On the other hand, schools should paid attention to the outlook of life of our students in fear of misguiding younsters.Let's join up together to guard our youngster aginst blinding idorship and to help them to get belief back.