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字数：300 满分：100分
可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者用词生动多样，高级词汇使用比较准确，但有少数拼写错误；文中衔接词丰富。
Should the Aged Be sent to the Nursing Home Recent years have seen a heated topic on whether the aged should be sent to the nursing home or not. The supports believe the nursing home with better facilities and servies can enlarge their friends circle and maintain harmony of family atmosphere. The other side,however,claims that with the intimate air,home is also a place of offering better care to the old. Personally,I perfer to choose home for the aged care for the following reasons. Firstly,the old can help their children to do some house care. In the mordern society,a majority of young people is busy with their work,which leads to the neglect to their children. Consequently,the grandparents play an extremely essential role in children's life. Furthermore,with no time to cooking,they have to choose the fast food that is unhealthy. At this time,the aged people are glad to prepare a delicious meal for them. Then,living together in the house,family members have a better understanding of the old people's needs so as to offer them better care. Taking into account all the relevant factors which affect and contribute to the attitude,we may safely conclude that home hold superiority over nursing home to the old. It is suggested that great efforts should be made to improve the medical professional skills of family members.
