2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Firstly，welcome to my hometown where i born and grow up!Today,i would like to take him to see a interesting place where had a long history but not short for modern feel .That is KaiPing barbican—a modern architecture which combination of Chinese and Western. The Republic of China，a complicated times，when KaiPing barbican was born in that times.Whenever you visit the barbican ,you can feel the war-ridden and many local people fled to west countries.when they live in west country for many year, own their factory even construct a big company . At that time,they back to china and enrich their village,construct some architecture indicate that they benefit future generations who always remember him.This is why i would like to take him to see.