2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者在句法层面做的很棒；作者词汇表达比较灵活多变，尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当。

From the chart we can see that life expectancy increased from 40 to 60 between 1960 and 1990,on the contrary,infant mortality decreased by 100 deaths through the period from 1960 to 1990. There are many factors contributing to this phenomenon.Firstly,with the development of medical equipment,more people get better therapy.Secondly,since safety awareness is widely penetrated, a number of people have common sense to keep healthy and safe and not try to do dangerous things.However,as society is growing faster and faster,we are living in a competitive world,many people are occupied with their work and have no time thinking for their family,such as having a baby,what's more,some women are not willing to have a baby because it will discourage them from getting higher position. As far as I'm concerned,if this tendency persists,our society will become an aging society,which will obstruct social development.