语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Due attention should be given to spelling These days,some students didn't take noice to spell in study English,It show on this condition cause and lead to a falut,because of technical and science is developing,many family use computer to write word,for a change this condition,I think about that society call on spell in English,school ecourage to writing ,family spend more time on spell with their children,it is necessary for us to spell.therefore,goverment send out a policy to support spell,I hope that people take action to spell,whenever our do,we want to take action,we keep up with the morden time fashion at the same time,and don't forget tradition Chinese spell.due attention should be given to spelling.