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We can not recognise one from the first thing we see or hear.because we can not receive a result from one affir. The truth would become another when it was passed many times,so we see or hear may not be what it originally be. As the story of blind men touch elphente. from what we touch firtly can we not to say what it is.because it is bias and unembody.what we need to do is to learn more about it ,only in this way can we get more information to recognise the truth.
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