2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

I would like to take my foreign friend to Qinghui Garden, one of the most famous places of interest in Shunde, Canton. Qinghui Garden is Number One Scholar Huang Shijun's house in Qing Dynasty. There are many old trees here. And a lot of historial rooms stand here, it's so beautiful and meaningful. I believe my foreign friend will be interested in it.