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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36959
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分49.5分
评语:

全文结构较为严谨;可适当增加从句和复合句的使用;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

I have a best friend named jingjing. We are familiar with each other since we were five years old. She is slin, tender . She has a good temper, and she is very nice to everyone. She is serious when she is working. She always try her best to solve the problem. She is specious for me. One day, I said to her that I was ill but I was afraid of going to the hospital. Inmediatedly She decided to came to accompany with me to go to the hospital and then she bought an air ticket when she hung up the phone. I am so lucky that I have a friend like jingjing.

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