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I have a best friend named jingjing. We are familiar with each other since we were five years old. She is slin, tender . She has a good temper, and she is very nice to everyone. She is serious when she is working. She always try her best to solve the problem. She is specious for me. One day, I said to her that I was ill but I was afraid of going to the hospital. Inmediatedly She decided to came to accompany with me to go to the hospital and then she bought an air ticket when she hung up the phone. I am so lucky that I have a friend like jingjing.