2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Guang xi, the southest province of China is my hometown. People here go to work in Guang Dong, another southern province of China, because the industry in my hometown is not very developed. People live on the agriculture most. Near my home, there is a high hill named The the dragon head hill. I like to take my friend to go there. In summer, you can climb the hill till the proof, the view look down the hill is very amazing, you can see all hill teatree, the hill far from you, the countries too. When the wind blow on you, just strench your hands and hug the cloud. And you can try some kind of wild fruit, you know them for the case. In winter, it is frozen. You can see the snow covered on the tree, all what you can see just like a person wear a white suit. That's another feeling from the hill. I think you can enjoy yourself anytime you come by.