语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;注意文中个别的句子错误;作者词汇表达较丰富,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
what's you see and hear?people conclude the result immediately which is unresonable,evident need to be identified ,we could consult in them and inquire others,things always have different aspect,when you comment on some reason and consider it objectively,aking yourself why it is happended,why they do that?what's counsequence?you sometime could look for book or check in your around whether you lost some detail,analysity it curious,thinking about if you were him and what would you do,lie always happened in our life,thinking independly,making use of your wisdom,you will understand as long as you are in that position.I would share my experience in you and wanna hear what's your opinion,all in all,truth not only see but also asking
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