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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
Recently,a saying that "The greatest use of life is to spend it from something that will outlast it"has been discussed fiercely.From my perspective,the implied meaning of the sentence is that hardly can we have a promising life without using valuable time in daily life. From my point of view,a multitude of examples can be found easily in daily life to illustrate my point.We all have similar experience that when we are about to fulfill the task,we usually need to search online for data and useful information.However,attracted by advertisement and online games,hardly can we finish the assignment on time and make our time meaningful.Living in the society full of temptations,many people,if not most,fail to use time reasonably,which will make our life boring and tedious.Appearently,the greatest use of life is of utmost significance for us. Considering the seriousness of problem,it is high time that people,youngsters especially,should have a clear plan and cultivate self-management ability in order to keep away from the various temptations,impaired life quality.Only by doing it,can we have a meaningful future.
可可英语 - 划词释义
