2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

As we all know,when we are do some important things we should make a plan.Like a proverb,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,which tell us we should make full of prepration in order to avoid failing. Nobody can know what will be happen in advance.Therefore,we should make plans and preprations for bad things so that we can deal with them better.Then,it can help us reduce the risk.Last but not least,it can promote our ability,if we are in trouble,we can keep calm and find the methods of sloving the problems quickly.But if we think about uncomprehensive,that's say if we put all eggs in one basket,we will lose our head when we come across sudden accidents. In conclision,it is very infeasible to put all eggs in one basket.Not only it will result in unexpected and unbearbable consequence,but also can we becoming absured and incomprehensible.