2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

As we all know,when we are doing some important things we should make a plan.Like a proverb,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,which tells us we should make full of preparation in order to avoid failing. Nobody can know what will happen in advance.Therefore,we should make plans and preparations for bad things so that we can deal with them better.Then,it can help us reduce the risk.Last but not least,it can promote our ability,if we are in trouble,we can keep calm and find the methods of solving the problems quickly.But if we think about uncomprehensive,which said if we put all eggs in one basket,we will lose our heads when we come across sudden accidents. In conclusion,it is very infeasible to put all eggs in one basket.Not only it will result in unexpected and unbearbable consequence,but also can we becoming absured and incomprehensible.