文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
As we all know,when we are doing some important things we should make a plan.Like a proverb,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,which tells us we should make full of preparation in order to avoid failing. Nobody can know what will happen in advance.Therefore,we should make plans and preparations for bad things so that we can deal with them better.Then,it can help us reduce the risk.Last but not least,it can promote our ability,if we are in trouble,we can keep calm and find the methods of solving the problems quickly.But if we think about uncomprehensive,which said if we put all eggs in one basket,we will lose our heads when we come across sudden accidents. In conclusion,it is very infeasible to put all eggs in one basket.Not only it will result in unexpected and unbearable consequence,but also can we become absurd and incomprehensible.