2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；能够使用一些简单的从句；文中词汇表达丰富度要提升，可是单词拼写错误稍多。

Nowdays, Computer is one imporant part in our life, we spend much time on it. such as leanring english on line, shopping online, we get some knowleadge, and save much time. however, each things have too side, it is halmful to our eayes when we seen the screen .we should pay attention to our health, do not use the computer all days, we need to have a relax, when useing the computer in 2 hours.