2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中词汇表达丰富度要提升，可是单词拼写错误稍多。

Nowdays, Computer is one imporant part in our life, we spent much time on it. such as leanring English on line, shopping online, we get some knowledge, and save much time. however, each thing have too side, it is halmful to our eayes when we seen the screen .we should pay attention to our health, do not use the computer all days, we need to have a relax, when useing the computer in 2 hours.