2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强，且注意拼写错误。

Nowdays, Computer is one important part in our life, we spent much time on it. such as leanring English on line, shopping online, we get some knowledge, and save much time. however, each thing have too side, it is halmful to our eayes when we seen the screen all day.we should pay attention to our health, do not use the computer all days, we need to have a relax, when useing the computer in 2 hours.