2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细。

Nowadays, Computer is one important part in our life, we spent much time on it. such as leanring English on line, shopping online, we get some knowledge, and save much time. however, each thing have too side, it is harmful to our eayes when we seen the screen all day.we should pay attention to our health, do not use the computer all days, we need to have a relax, when useing the computer in 2 hours.