2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

Nowadays, Computer is one important part in our life, we spent much time on it. such as learning English on line, shopping online, we get some knowledge, and save much time. however, each thing has too side, it is harmful to our eyes when we seen the screen all day.we should pay attention to our health, do not use the computer all days, we need to have a relax, when use the computer in 2 hours.