小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

I am seven years old, a little boy. I am a student of grade one. I am a freshman in this school. I want to make friends with other students. My deskmate is a beautiful girl. Her voice is nice. she is kindly to everyone. she looks clean and neat. i like her and i make friend with her immediately. we study together at school and after school we go home together.