2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In my eyes ,china is very beautiful and misterious .Living in china ,you can find that everybody all known about Beijing .Surely ,The greatwall is an interestingplace to vist. The greatwall is too steepy for me to climb.Howevey ,many touriser would go to beijing to climb The greatwall.If you are first time come to china ,i advised that you can vist beijing at first.In addition, guangzhou is a good choose.In guangzhou ,you will feel the sky of guangzhou is very blue ,and the weather is fine.Of course,local food is delicious.