2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写做的很棒，高级词汇可适量增加；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。

Recently there is fierce attention on the online shopping that it has become increasingly fashion.We can purchase an overwhelming variety of clothes,ornaments or even fruits whenever and wherever we want. No one can deny the fact that shopping online indeed brings convenience to us,nevertheless,it also causes many side effects.It can tempt people to waste plenty of time to look through the websites,which not only does harm to their health,but also have negative influence on both their life and work.Additionally,those who are addicted to shopping online could hardly make ends meet every month and it is really embarrassing.What is worse,it is easier to be deceived. Accordingly,I cling to the perspective that we are supposed to shop less on the Internet.We can regard it as an entertainment in our leisure time to find real bargains.Conversely,do not invest much energy as well as money into it.I hope more people can shop online wisely.