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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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The word "it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket"is known to us in many ways,especially in finational isure. Tostly people known that we could earn much money from the finational tikets.I think they are wise,becase of put money into different finational tikets so that people could put down the risks and rid of their own money down in time . Besides,if people put all their eggs in one basket,their mind and idea would became simple. I think it is dangerous for our country and people to create more achievements.Of course,our policy encourage developing creation of people. In a word,it is unwise to put all our eggs in one basket.

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