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The word "it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket"is known to us in many ways,especially in finational isure. Tostly people known that we could earn much money from the finational tikets.I think they are wise,becase of put money into different finational tikets so that people could put down the risks and rid of their own money down in time . Besides,if people put all their eggs in one basket,their mind and idea would became simple. I think it is dangerous for our country and people to create more achievements.Of course,our policy encourage developing creation of people. In a word,it is unwise to put all our eggs in one basket.