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Dear Jim: It is a great pleasure for me to receive your letter and i am even happier to know that you and your parents are coming to China and spend the the Mid-Autumn day here. The Mid-Autumn day has a long history,and it is a traditional festival for the chinese people.On this day,family usually get together and have a great dinner together.Enjoying mooncake is also an indispensable part of this festival,for the chinese,this food stands for the spirit of festival-unity.After dinner,if the weather permits,chinese families usually go out and enjoy the beautiful view of the Moon. I am sure you and your parents will enjoy the festival very much. Yours sincerely Lilei