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雅思写作范文:空运蔬菜水果的利弊

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:05浏览次数:986
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雅思写作主题:空运蔬菜水果的利弊,字数在300字以内。
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章高级词汇较多样,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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Air-transported fruits and vegetables have been welcomed by the regions where can't grow these foreign products thanks to the ever-increasing people's economy. The business between the air lines and the farmers is certainly boosting over the last few decades contributing to numerous areas in our society. To start off with the customers who get to enjoy a variety of out- of -season foods, people now live in the different part of the earth could easily have the access to taste exotic products by their wish through the most efficient transport system. Moreover, not only are foodies around the world satisfied by the easy moving of fruits and vegetables, farmers could double their incomes by the increasingly producing goods and the sale to more places other than their own land. As for the air companies, they are offered more options to extend their business to fight with the tough market. Companies use to survive by the amount of people commuting by planes are now expanding their business to transport goods. With a wider range of business, they get more margin and customers to deal with the shrinking market. Despite all those benefits air transporting business have been bringing to our society, it has its down side as well. For one thing, i would like to disscuss it first, expanding demands for exporting and inporting goods around the world have caused huge energy waste due to the fuel costing by the air plane and it is totally against our energy saving plans. What is more, those food that might cater to people's forever-lasting crave, however it conttributs to the invironmental pullution as well. Just imagine every bite of those foreign delicacies means effort to ruin our beautiful earth by piece. So, i suggest we take it seriously. And the solution is not that hard as we thought. By changing our view towards supermarket's foreign food, we get to spare part of those inported food thought planes. We should also try to make affort to introduce some foreign fruits and vegetables in our land rather than inport them using scientifi mathods.

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