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2005年考研英语作文真题:A letter to your Mr.Wan

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:55浏览次数:1800
要求:
题目 A letter to your Mr. Wan
说明 Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & fashions. But now you find that the word is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason (s), and making an apology.
要求
1.Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang
2.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
3.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
字数:100满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Dear Mr. Wang, Thank you very much for having offered me this promising position to work for this best-selling magazine.It never occurred to me that I would have to leave.However,today I make the hard decision to quit it. Painfully,I have realized that I overestimated my adaptability.My personality actually can't match the requirements of this position which highly values open-mindedness and creativity.What's more,the shortage of professional knowledge,both in designing and editing,has influenced my job performance more negatively than I expected. I apologize for any inconvenience I might have caused and wish you could consider my request.Please let me know if there is anything I can do to make this transition easier for your company. Yours sincerely Li Ming

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