作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear Mr. Wang, Thank you very much for having offered me this promising position to work for this best-selling magazine.It never occurred to me that I would have to leave.However,today I make the hard decision to quit it. Painfully,I have realized that I overestimated my adaptability.My personality actually can't match the requirements of this position which highly values open-mindedness and creativity.What's more,the shortage of professional knowledge,both in designing and editing,has influenced my job performance more negatively than I expected. I apologize for any inconvenience I might have caused and wish you could consider my request.Please let me know if there is anything I can do to make this transition easier for your company. Yours sincerely Li Ming