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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，高级词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。
We all know that life is limited for a man, however,it is limitless for the hole human. Therefore, to prolong our finite life, we would put our life into making meaningful deeds. It denotes the saying that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. The real life can prove my view. We are all nobody in our school, but when we hold a meaningful activity together, just like promoting envrionmental,we are somebody in a sence. While how to make our life more meaningful? Just in my opinoin, it is not to do the great tings but to a true doer in our daily life. We love our environment and give a help hand to the small and weak. If all of us can keep careful to our daily life, we are making meaning. Our limited life can be much colorful and significative.
