文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
From the picture given above,we can observe that a conversation between a boy and a librarian is going on.The boy asks"where is the book called'How To Do Well In School Without Studying'".The librarian replies"It is over there in the fiction section."Apparently,the cartoonist want to convey through the picture is that hardly can we success easily without studying. Some reasons can be found to support my arguments.To begin with,with the rapid development of science and technology,a host of people,youngsters especially,fail to acquire a wide range of knowledge without technology.A great many people intend to achieve extraordinarily success quickly,which lead to neglect accumulating basical knowledge in school.In addition,the short-term achievement,which will fail to practice in long-term. What are discussed above,we can easily come to the conclusion that there is not a shortcut to learning without efforts.Thus,we should cultivate our capability of learning.Only in this way,can we have a promising future.
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