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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33564
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

More and more foreign products are sold by the alien merchant directly or indirectly to Chinese market, thus international advertising can be seen everywhere in Chinese market and every corner of the street in China. That is, through various forms in order to pass information to the public, draw attention, arouse interest, stimulate desire, so as to facilitate final purchase behavior. It is totally accord with the theory of American scholar E.S. Louis AIDA who put forward in the early time. In these advertisements, we can find that there are many honorific words that commonly used in our life,  making consumers feel kind, natural and sincere, shaking the people's hearts, causing a kind of temptation can't resist. A successful advertisement can let consumers naturally accept products which are mentioned in the AD. Original and exotic works can always arouse the reader's feeling of freshness, so translators do not have to change the text under the control of the habits of the target language, definitely must not to accommodate the target language readers blindly, because to do so easily backfire. The translator should try to get the original from author, then guides the reader to near him. Generally speaking, literal translation is the most direct and simple translation in advertising translation and also the most ideal method in advertising translation.

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