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Because of the different political and economic system, the development of Chinese and western religion have experienced a long tortuous history, in the respective development process of their religion, formed its own religious system. During the warring states period, China once appeared the phenomenon of hundreds schools of thought contended, the governor in order to consolidate its dominant position gradually revered Confucian and dethrone hundreds. Oriental religion refers to the Chinese Confucianism, Taoism and Buddhism. Confucianism is classic economic theory, later became the basis of a dynasty of one thousand years, which emphasis on "the three cardinal guides and the constant virtues" and ethical morals, Taoism originate from Laozi, pay attention to penance and abstinence, in addition, Buddhism is required "no lust, no desire". Under the three cardinal guides and the ethical morals, religious belief has greatly suppress the human desire, so the generation of the psychological foundation is the sense of fear, which is emphasize the people expect to the religious god". However, there is an affair about Zeus and other gods from the mythology of ancient Greek, and there are stories about people in adultery in the Christian bible. What’s more, modern Christianity claimed that you could not be punished as long as you feel good in conscience. Therefore, westerners are faith and worship to the god of the Christian region. Western regarded the Christianity as the basis of region, because of the different condition of national, which lead to the bigger differences between the western and Chinese western religious. China's law clearly do not contain the content of the ethnic, religion, sex, banning the use of national leaders to advertising. However, Westerners who are often use the celebrity and the national leaders to advertising , and even jokes about god. Please see the next typical advertisement: