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行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩。
in the modern,busy and fast-paced society,it has become prevailing and prevalent for individuals to come to Chain.when taking a glance around ,we can easily find a sea of people ,old or youth, male or female, in coming my country to different culture and taste food.when you come my hometown, i will recommend you to see qsh army. what,you are wonder,can account for this？on my personal level,two forcing factors contribute ton it .To begin with,the reason why it is vital for world is no other than the fact that it is very grandeur, it ,first ruler of chain,is a graveyard. in addition,it is closely related to history value .
