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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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Some poeple think what they see or hear is all right and make the point as soon as possible. There is no denying that this thinking is wrong. Firstly what we see is wrong in the some time on the grounds that the truth maybe wear lies' clothes. So what we usualluy see is wrong. Secondly, what we see in the little time is a part of whole thing. And we can't make the final conclusion judging on the incomplete things. Last but not least making a coclusion should take a lot of things into conclusion like the background. The same things may be different according to the different backgrounds. Now draw to the consequence, in my opinion when we make the final conclusion we should based on a lot of things. In other words we can't make the points as aoon as we saw something.

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