采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
Some poeple thinks what they see or hear is all right and make the point as soon as possible. There is no denying that this thinking is wrong. Firstly what we see is wrong in some time on the grounds that the truth maybe wears lies' clothes. So what we see is wrong usually. Secondly, what we see in the little time is a part of whole thing. And we can't make the final conclusion judging on the incomplete things. Last but not least making a coclusion should take a lot of things into conclusion like the background. The same things may be different according to the different backgrounds. Now draw to the consequence, in my opinion when we make the final conclusion we should based on a lot of things. In other words we can't make the points as aoon as we saw something.
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