采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Some people think what they see or hear is all right and make the point as soon as possible. There is no denying that this thinking is wrong. Firstly what we see is wrong in some time on the grounds that the truth maybe wears lies' clothes. So what we see is wrong usually. Secondly, what we see in the little time is a part of whole thing. And we can't make the final conclusion judging on the partly things. Last but not least making a conclusion should take a lot of things into sonsiderration like the background. The same things may be different according to the different backgrounds. Now draw to the consequence, in my opinion when we make the final conclusion we must base on a lot of things. Put another way we can't make the points as soon as we saw something.
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