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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。
From: Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date : December 23 rd, 2008 To: sales-department@@hotmail.com Subject: Check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, I am Wanghaiyang,a workers in our company.I have some questions to ask you.Hoping i can get the answer from you. According to our signing of the No．35 order．We have ordered 3500 products,but now we only received 3000 ones.we are confused ,and the boss of our company has felt a little angry.Where was the other 500 ones went?We hope you can give us a explicit answer,we don't want to break the partnership .Please check your product list． That's all.All above is my question .We are looking forward to your early reply! Thank you!
