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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。
From: Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date : December 23 rd, 2008 To: sales-department@@hotmail.com Subject: Check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, I am Wanghaiyang,a worker in our company.I have some questions to ask you.Hoping I can learn the answer from you. According to our signing of the No．35 orders．We have ordered 3500 products,but now we only received 3000 ones.we are confused ,and the boss of our company has felt a little angry.Where were the other 500 ones went?We hope you can give us a clear answer and we don't want to break the partnership.Please check your product list． That's all.All above is my question.We are looking forward to your early reply! Thank you!
