全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真。
There are three ridiculous thing in the world.first,you taken your parents money and sing the song'my hard parents'in KTV.second,you said money is no easy to take.but you take money to buy wine.The last one.you cuted up the trees ang used then make the newespaper and write that'we should protect the trees,we should defend our environment'.it's so funny